Saturday, December 26, 2009

post-Advent haiku

bows undone, gifts freed

the presents of here and now

a no-thing-ness reigns

2 comments:

Mark Murphy said...

Paulie;

That last line, more specifically the "no-thing-ness," reminds me of my uncle's poetry; as I recall, he would sometimes break a word apart like that to get another meaning.

All of the above, of course, is meant as a high compliment from

mark m., reporting from Albany.

Pawlie Kokonuts said...

at-one-ment

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